Digging up Life

Okay. I admit it. The first time I tried a short story prompt, it wasn’t as painful as I expected. (You can read that here.) And it’s probably healthy, exercising my short story skills. So I summoned my courage to try another one. Hello Storymatic, what’s on the menu today? Here’s what I drew:


So, this one required a bit of research. Mostly because I saw the term “gravedigger” and wondered what that means in today’s society. Obviously it’s not one guy with a shovel, right? Thus, I had to educate myself. And in my research, I found this fascinating article.

I won’t lie. You may see a gravedigger in one of my future books. Why haven’t I thought about this profession before? It’s actually quite fascinating. Anyway, on with the story. Here we go.

There’s a look people give when they find out what I do, all curious and concerned at the same time. The look is usually followed up with, “How do you do it, dealing with death all the time?”

“Well, dead people have never given me any trouble,” I joke. “It’s peaceful. Nothing I’d rather do.”

They laugh, accepting it as a joke. A gravedigger with a sense of humor. They probably see it as a natural side effect of the work.

It’s the same answer I give every time, a mix of truth and lies. It is actually a great job. For me, anyway. But it’s a lie that dead people have never given me any trouble. There’s one who’s given me plenty.

Grave digging isn’t what most people imagine it to be–an old man hunched over a shovel, carving out a final resting place for their relative. I’m no spring chicken, that much may be true. But modern technology makes it faster, simpler. No long hours of shoveling.

But no one wants to see it happen.

I guess you could say I’m a magician of sorts. I make a grave appear, ready to receive the dearly departed. And then when all the goodbyes are said, I make the casket disappear, the only lingering evidence a brand-new tombstone.

But no one ever wants to see the work happen. So I’ve gotten good at being invisible.

Turns out, I’m not the only one.

It was one of those damp April mornings, the ones that make you ache all the way through to your bones. Row 19, Plot 22 was about to receive its occupant later that morning. So I had to get it dug and sneak out of the way.

Once the last mourner had vanished, I returned with the backhoe. ‘Bout scared the life out of me when I saw her. I’d just finished filling in the new residence of the recently departed when she jumped down from her hiding spot in the tree. Her skin and dress were nearly the same color as the bark, even if I’d looked up, I probably woulda missed her.

She eyed me solemnly. Couldn’ta been more than ten.

“So he dead, huh.” Her gaze was fixed on the freshly covered plot.

I nodded. “Yeah. He’s dead.” Least I sure hoped so, since I’d just buried the man.

Glancing around, I looked for any adult who may be responsible for this child. The broad cemetery was empty ‘cept for us.

“You Zacharias Ramsey?”

“I am.” I couldn’t imagine why she’d know my name, but something about those dark brown eyes looked familiar. It hit me at the same time as her next words.

“I’m Celina.”

Lord have mercy. I’d been looking for her for two years. My daughter’s baby girl. Oh, that daughter of mine. She was nothing but trouble, but one thing she did right: she gave birth to a beautiful little girl. How I loved that little girl. But when my daughter died a couple years back, no one knew where Celina was. No one had seen her or her daddy for months. She simply vanished.

I loped over to her as fast as my old bones could carry me and fell to my knees, wrapping my arms around that little girl. Tears spilled right down my face. I didn’t care. If someone couldn’t cry in a cemetery, where could a person cry?

I didn’t know how she found me. Or where she’d been those two years. There would be time later for those questions.

In that moment, all I wanted was to hold my grandbaby, here in this place where I covered up the dead and their secrets. Here where life had found me.

So. What say you? Have you encountered a modern-day gravedigger in any books you’ve read? What kind of story would you write with that prompt?


  1. Jaime wright
    Sep 19, 2015 @ 15:27:37

    Oooooo love this. What a concept. The one who makes the home in which the dead will lay.


    • halee
      Sep 19, 2015 @ 15:37:18

      Isn’t that such a fascinating thought? I mean, that person is literally the last to deal with someone’s remains. The one who tucks them in to their final resting place.


  2. Kathleen Denly
    Oct 28, 2015 @ 16:38:24

    Being a historical fiction writer my mind immediately pictured the single grave digger with a shovel. I love that you acknowledged that universal image, but then took a modern twist on the story. The idea of finding life in a graveyard was also great. You did a very good job of not going with the obvious here and keeping me interested. Thanks for sharing! 🙂


    • halee
      Oct 28, 2015 @ 22:28:09

      Thanks, Kathleen! I love acknowledging my assumptions and then looking for ways to challenge those or highlight a different angle. And I learned a few things in the process, which is always a fantastic bonus.


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